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Haiku

April 6, 2014 by

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  1. Anna says
    April 11, 2014 at 1:22 pm

    And you were worried about yours. They are great! If I was in a creative mood, I would write haiku about my favorite public transit crazies LOL!

  2. Jeannine Hall Gailey says
    April 6, 2014 at 6:16 pm

    Thank you for posting this! I think I got mine in under the wire…They were sort of rush work, not perfect, but here they are (or at least one version of them…I may have changed them in the process of posting them in the comments 🙂

    Lost amid a crowd
    someone opens a door –
    lighting the dark path.

    Commuting at daybreak,
    the air chilled under a pale sky,
    hands wrapped around coffee.

  3. bermudaonion (Kathy) says
    April 6, 2014 at 11:21 am

    How fun! Good luck to you! If I were to attempt a haiku about New York it would be about Times Square. I guess that could fit under the topic of strangers.

    • Serena says
      April 7, 2014 at 8:15 am

      Kathy, I thought about doing one about Times Sq. but I ended up getting distracted by a sick kiddo. So I didn’t write any more than the five above.

  4. Beth Hoffman says
    April 6, 2014 at 10:48 am

    They are all terrific. My favorite is Amtrak!