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200th Virtual Poetry Circle

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  1. I really liked this one, especially the lines “I have such a desire to overcome this life.
    But I’m not good at it.” You can just tell the narrator is carrying a burden of some kind.

  2. Beth Hoffman says

    This poem just might end up being one of my all-time favorites. My senses opened wide, as did my heart.