
Remember, this is just for fun and is not meant to be stressful.
Keep in mind what Molly Peacock’s book suggested.
Look at a line, a stanza, sentences, and images; describe what you like or don’t like; and offer an opinion. If you missed my review of her book, check it out here.
Today’s poem is from Lucy Ives from Orange Roses:
Beastgardens first garden Beastgarden. second garden Bees go mad on late summer evenings, should People stray from their jobs towards water Beastgarden. third garden Who makes the rented red boat's Oars turn Who is the younger one always Turning up Who professes to be better because He is just looking Who says he is worse off as He cannot look Beastgarden. fourth garden The unicycle girl, thin Like one with a sexual problem, Goes through The Schlosspark. This follows: Father rolling his eyes Beastgarden. fifth garden The man from Manchester Has my breast in his hand These are funny They don't do anything do they Being burnt by a fire I say Beastgarden. sixth garden Similarly, if only You grasped some Titanic misery or a Love like an old man's Beastgarden. seventh garden Where were we A ballroom competition goes on A yellow satin bikini A fuchsia floor-length are Dancing; an audience is Drinking, clapping 1 2 3 1 2 3 Beastgarden.
What do you think?



