320th Virtual Poetry Circle

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  1. Anna (Diary of an Eccentric) says

    Beautiful poem, but I didn’t listen to the narration so can’t comment on that.

  2. Beth Hoffman says

    This poem is gorgeous. It touched me in a deep place. The narration, however, did nothing for me; it felt flat, rushed, and lacking in the delicate energy of the poem. So I read it silently to myself and enjoyed it more. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful poem.