161st Virtual Poetry Cricle

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  1. That is a great last line. I love these narrative-type poems.
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  2. Beth Hoffman says

    Now here’s what fascinated me — I have a less than zero interest in baseball, and yet this poem took hold of me and delighted me line by line. I loved it!

    Favorite line: “… I steal away from my wife’s warm arms to watch the moon sail
    like a well-hit fly over the stadium…”