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104th Virtual Poetry Circle


Welcome to the 104th Virtual Poetry Circle!

Remember, this is just for fun and is not meant to be stressful.

Keep in mind what Molly Peacock’s books suggested. Look at a line, a stanza, sentences, and images; describe what you like or don’t like; and offer an opinion. If you missed my review of her book, check it out here.

Also, sign up for the 2011 Fearless Poetry Reading Challenge because its simple; you only need to read 1 book of poetry.  Please contribute to the growing list of 2011 Indie Lit Award Poetry Suggestions, visit the stops on the National Poetry Month Blog Tour from April.

Today’s poem is from Carl Adamshick’s Curses and Wishes, which I hope to review soon, on page 9.

Home

You had been gone a few days.
The place went looking for you,

unaware you were returning.

I remained lonely in the evening
when the moon broadcasted

silence through the dust.

My love was once
a faint blue tear
of thin glass glowing
in my chest.

Now my love is you.

It must be three in the afternoon
and I am trying to sleep
on your side of the bed.

Let me know your thoughts, ideas, feelings, impressions. Let’s have a great discussion…pick a line, pick an image, pick a sentence.

I’ve you missed the other Virtual Poetry Circles. It’s never too late to join the discussion.

  • You really do sense the loneliness in this poem. I love how the poet manages to accomplish this in so few words!

    In my house, it’s a battle for the covers. Jerry will steal them, I steal them back, and on it goes for the rest of the night. LOL

  • This is very lovely. Needs an additional line though to the effect of: but even if I don’t, I’ll still steal the covers!

    • I find this poem to be very lonely, but trying not to be lonely, if that makes sense. I like your line.

      • Yes, and my “additional” line really has nothing to do with that, but that last line just made me think of what it’s like to try to sleep in the same bed with my husband! LOL

        • I’m the cover thief here! But its ok because the husband is always too hot.